The Ultimate Racer
This is about a boy who grows up in the beginning he is
fifteen and has just learn to drive he decides to take his
mothers car for a joy ride and finds himself in a secret
place in his neighborhood where they race and decides hes
gonna race well he does and wins and finds he is a good
racer so he keeps going back and back and winning more money
until someone tells him he probably isnt that good on a
motorcycle so he decides to take the challenge and in a few
weeks he learns to ride a motorcycle and he goes to the
meeting place and races the challenger and wins so he keeps
going back and forth from car racing to motorcycle racing
until he is challenged once again this time to a four
wheeler race so he thinks hey if I can race motorcycles and
cars I can do this so he borrows a friends motorcycle and
learns to ride and he goes and races the person and wins and
we know what happens he keeps going between the three until
he faces his ultimate challenge truck racing were talking
18 wheelers he is only 15 how can he drive a truck and this
happens at a bad time because his absent father chose to pop
up now but coincidence his father is a truck drive thats a
basic point of the script dont know how u can formulate it
all together.
-- Script Pitch III Host Commentary --
Lee's Analysis:
I was impressed that you didnt have "one" sentence in
here, but this concept hasn't really been developed yet. This title can
work, but not with these details.
