Michael's Pain
Michael is a fifteen year old boy from a small southern
town. He is well liked in school, but people question his
shyness, wondering if he was beat as a child or just doesn't
of this skills to carry on a conversation. Michael keeps
quiet and shy because at home he abused by his stepfather
John. John does abuse Michael but not physically, he abuses
him mentally and Michael never tells anyone so this problem
just keeps escalating and when Michael had enough he turns
to drugs and drinking and by the age of seventeen he becomes
a heroin addict.
Michael's biological father Jim died when he was only
four due to a drug overdose. But when Michael takes too much
ecstasy he lands in the hospital and his mother finally
realizes that something is wrong and something has to be
done. Will Michael ever get his act together and stand up to
John or will he follow in the same foot-steps as his father
and land up dead by the age of twenty-eight.
Note: I plan on writing an expansion on this with more of
the mother involved and also including flashbacks of
Michael's father.
-- Script Pitch III Co-Host Commentary
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by Stephen Lucas
Stephen's Analysis:
I think theres a very good story to be told here.
Right now, the film comes off pretentious and melodramatic
to truly get behind. We dont often see films really dive
into the abusive home relationships very often, at least not
between sons and fathers. I think if "Michaels Pain"
focuses on this aspect, and its effect on him throughout his
adulthood, this film could have potential.
However, before that can happen Id like to see more
being added to his character than just his past. Perhaps add
more about his current life to build upon your story. (You
should possibly consider switching titles, as the current
one comes off a bit bland.)
Rating: C+