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Loveable Losers
The script is divided into seven chapters, each chapter
focusing on a character who "cool" kids would consider a
loser. It deals with the problems going on with kids and
adults such as religious issues, suicide, family problems,
and mental issues. All the characters will come from all
kinds of backgrounds -- white, black, Hispanic, Asian, male,
female. The end of each chapter will leave you guessing
whether the character's main problem is solved or not. For
example, the chapter involving teen suicide would end right
as the character is rushed into a hospital as doctors
attempt to save the character's life.
-- Script Pitch III Co-Host Commentary --
by Stephen Lucas
Stephen's Analysis:
Now, I want to say that I like this pitch because I
do but I dont think this is a complete pitch. What we
have here is more of a conceptual plan for a movie. With a
pitch, I want details about the story, the characters, and
the subplots. Who are the people featured in the seven
stories? We need to know.
Rating: B- |
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