The Family Tree
The Family Tree is the story of a young boy who is given an
assignment at school to research his family tree, then give
an oral report to his class. Much to the dismay of his
father, the boy selects his imaginative and sometimes
rebellious grandfather to begin his research. The
grandfather is more than happy to oblige; in fact, he
decides not only to tell his grandson about his roots -- he
decides to take him on a road trip and show him his roots.
Throughout this adventure, the boy and grandfather must beat
all odds, including the insensitive father and a pair of
hapless thieves hoping to relieve the grandfather of his
lifetime savings. In the end, everyone learns a lesson or
two: about life - about friends - and most of all, about
family.
-- Script Pitch III Host Commentary --
by Lee Tistaert and Stephen Lucas
Lee's Analysis:
This reminds me a little of Secondhand Lions, which I
didn’t like; I thought it was too much of a family movie,
being too cutesy and light. This concept can go a few
directions, and one of which is being really sappy and
corny; another is an intelligent, thought-provoking journey
that moves you emotionally without manipulating you. The
difference is so vast that it’s a risk of a project at least
with my taste, but the reward of it actually working would
be very good, especially with the dangers that confront its
storytelling possibilities.
I’d have to see the actual script to really know for
sure, but it could near the level of Stand by Me as the
ultimate dream of this genre. An experience like Stand by Me
is really difficult to achieve, so it’s iffy, but I’d say
there’s potential within. There’s also a comparison to The
Bicycle Thief, and though I don't consider it to be as grand as Stand by Me, it's still a pretty damn good
film.
And if you can achieve either level, or even just a solid,
believable film, you have an accomplishment, considering the
many titles in this genre that fail to register.
Stephen's Analysis:
Your title is too boring for the movie you’re
pitching. It reminds me of "Big Fish" and "Secondhand
Lions." I didn’t like either of these movies, but it was
because they weren’t executed well. What you have here is a
very workable premise that could excel if given to the right
people to work with the material.
Tim Burton may be a very imaginative and creative
director, but "Big Fish," which ponders a father’s
misleading/mythical stories of his past, is superficial,
slow, and wholly disgusting. Family movies are sticky
territory, but there is certainly room to do something
great. You have a very basic outline of that greatness, and
now you need to color it in so we can see the whole picture.
Rating: B- |